There is too nonchalant

dxq319

Fristly ,i declare i 'm not the student of this college.when i browsing internet  found it by chance.and it made me so  sadness ,is it  a college ?this problem puzzled me for long-playing.
i cannt find a little silhouette of college,even though,i have been there  one times
so ,i feel so pity for yours who studying here ,you waste you life and you dad&mam's money for here

˙假裝┌.钚在泘

who do u think u r？
You aren't qualified to say a words!
rubbish！
fuck u！

[ 本帖最后由 ˙假裝┌.钚在泘 于 2008-1-11 16:37 编辑 ]

dxq319

you cannt  accept it  , you must trust the truth !!
Looking around of  you,you will say you are not wasting your  life?

˙假裝┌.钚在泘

if i have a such arrogant son，i will take my own life ！
so ，u r the real pity of ur parents！

kwun21

Aha，I am fucking  the LZ's GF.
You r such a bitch!

dounaicheng

首先是题目错了，要不就 here is too nonchalant  ，要不就There is too much  nonchalance
其次是单词用错，firstly 之后怎么没东西了，secondly 呢？
再次，语法错误。when i browsing internet  found it by chance。应该是i  found it by chance when browsing the internet
   还有and it made me so  sadness  。应该是and it made me so  sad ，用形容词啊，大姐
还有i cannt find a little silhouette of college ，双重否定错误，应该是i can find  little silhouette of college
还有i feel so pity for yours who studying here  ，应该是i feel so pity for you who studying here
还有you waste you life and you dad&mam's money for here，应该是you waste your lives and your dad&mam's money  here
最后，这个人的品德有问题

˙假裝┌.钚在泘

搵得咁仔细？我见到几处。。。都5愿理佢孒。。。。LS恏掂喔~~伱改错恏掂嘎？

kwun21

DemonBaby

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