There is too nonchalant
Fristly ,i declare i 'm not the student of this college.when i browsing internetfound it by chance.and it made me sosadness ,is ita college ?this problem puzzled me for long-playing.i cannt find a little silhouette of college,even though,i have been thereone times
so ,i feel so pity for yours who studying here ,you waste you life and you dad&mam's money for here
rubbish！
who do u think u r？You aren't qualified to say a words!
rubbish！
fuck u！
[ 本帖最后由 ˙假裝┌.钚在泘 于 2008-1-11 16:37 编辑 ] you canntaccept it, you must trust the truth !!
Looking around ofyou,you will say you are not wasting yourlife? if i have a such arrogant son，i will take my own life ！
so ，u r the real pity of ur parents！
Aha，I am fuckingthe LZ's GF.
You r such a bitch!
严重语法错误，果然是高手
首先是题目错了，要不就 here is too nonchalant，要不就There is too muchnonchalance其次是单词用错，firstly 之后怎么没东西了，secondly 呢？
再次，语法错误。when i browsing internetfound it by chance。应该是ifound it by chance when browsing the internet
还有and it made me sosadness。应该是and it made me sosad ，用形容词啊，大姐
还有i cannt find a little silhouette of college ，双重否定错误，应该是i can findlittle silhouette of college
还有i feel so pity for yours who studying here，应该是i feel so pity for you who studying here
还有you waste you life and you dad&mam's money for here，应该是you waste your lives and your dad&mam's moneyhere
最后，这个人的品德有问题 搵得咁仔细？我见到几处。。。都5愿理佢孒。。。。LS恏掂喔~~伱改错恏掂嘎？ 强烈顶你````````哈哈
正么烂的英语就别来献丑了````
清职院是个卧虎藏龙的地方``卡卡``` 哈哈`好笑